TheEntertainer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[World on Fire]

Awesome.

The vaults still terrify me. I nearly jumped out of my skin when those cloned people attacked me!

Very nice shading and line art, and although the detail on the ground isn't the best, it's alright because the focal point is the poster.

How to win the game:

Step 1: Take annoying storyteller kid to Bigtown
Step 2: Get party hat
Step 3: Wear party hat
Step 4: Go back to little lamplight
Step 5: Go to Biwwy
Step 6: Get Wazer Wifle
Step 7: Equip Wazer Wifle
Step 8: Go somewhere with civilians and very few guards
Step 9: Throw a lazer lightshow party
Step 10: Win the game

Pillowmint responds:

War. War never changes...for the most part. Sometimes it involves lasers.

[Symbiote Colored]

awesome detail in the lineart!

I always wondered what he'd look like with Joker scars! That has to be my favorite part of the drawing - the strands of skin going across it look awesome and it's a cool excuse to reshape his lower jaw. All the saliva coming out of his mouth shows the direction his mouth and tongue are moving, and really add to Venom's creature-like appearance!

n00b103 responds:

The torn mouth appearance was inspired by the Xenomorphs from Aliens.
I also loved the idea that Venom would open his gape so wide that his jaws are actually getting torn in the process.

[blue lazery stuffs]

No fair!

I CANT FAVORITE THIS UNTIL YOU GET SCOUTED!!! HURRY UP ALREADY!!!
I REAAAAALLY like this one! The shaded, twisting, crystal-like spikes look really awesome. The only thing I don't really like is the overlapping negative-space triangle along the right side of the picture.

RandomlyArtistic responds:

This is currently my basement pc wallpaper!
and that negitive space thing was put there to make an almost broken glass like effect!

[The glaring eyes]

Epic!

I like the darker atmosphere here. I would suggest making the smoke come from a source (make it look like the smoke is coming from somewhere, like the eyes or a pair of nostrils), which would look really cool. This is awesome, btw.

RandomlyArtistic responds:

thx!
=D

[Dunkleosteus Serpentes]

uh oh tremerz!

Love the shading, texture details in the character! I would've liked to see a background, to get a sense of his environment, but besides that it's awesome!
It reminds me of the worms from the tremerz game.
This is so EPIC!

kmau responds:

Uh oh tremerzzzz. I guess he would be too heavy to move outside the water though.

His natural environment would be the bottom of the sea, and the resulting very dark background would have ruined it. It would fit if he was partially covered in mud or something, but this pose is just too revealing and contradicts his hunting habbits. Blablabla, you get the point. 8U

[{BT} Beware]

Nice!

A few trees and bushes would look nice here, because it seems kind of empty. Aside from that, the texture and shading are great.

In "Winnie the Pooh", there is a similar sign outside piglets house.

BenTibbetts responds:

Really! Cool. I didn't know that about piglet. Thanks for the helpful criticism.

[Around Past CD cover]

nice detail!

Lots of great detail in the shading and skyline, and I especially like the unique architecture(?) of the rocks.

raynoa responds:

It's kind of logo of music band in center, made from rocks.

[Jack Striden]

Very nice art style!

I like your art style, and the character is very unique. If you plan on making a comic with him, however, you should remove the face mask so people can understand his facial expression.

Jackstriden18 responds:

thanx for the feedback dude. but if you dont mind me correcting you a little, a character doesnt always need to show the mouth to demonstrate expressions. any good artist knows that the eyes and body language can be used to show emotion as well if not more so.

a perfect example of this is Spider man you cant see his face but the way his body is drawn when he is talking or how big the eye parts of his mask get when he's surprised show just enough emotion that the reader can relate to the character.

again im not trying to lecture you i do appreciate you pointing that out. i just wanna let you know that i know what im doing

[Dark Magician Girl]

not so fast!

you've triggered my trap card!

my special ability bypasses your trap card!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!(life points drop to zero)

levian05 responds:

;D

[Midna Lisa]

lol @ splatter!

how does a picture ruin your speakers?

Sabtastic responds:

Hah - thanks for the 10.