TheEntertainer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[blue lazery stuffs]

No fair!

I CANT FAVORITE THIS UNTIL YOU GET SCOUTED!!! HURRY UP ALREADY!!!
I REAAAAALLY like this one! The shaded, twisting, crystal-like spikes look really awesome. The only thing I don't really like is the overlapping negative-space triangle along the right side of the picture.

RandomlyArtistic responds:

This is currently my basement pc wallpaper!
and that negitive space thing was put there to make an almost broken glass like effect!

[The glaring eyes]

Epic!

I like the darker atmosphere here. I would suggest making the smoke come from a source (make it look like the smoke is coming from somewhere, like the eyes or a pair of nostrils), which would look really cool. This is awesome, btw.

RandomlyArtistic responds:

thx!
=D

[mask]

WHAT?

I WOULD LIKE TO DIRECT EVERYONE'S ATTENTION TO THIS PICTURES' TAGS!

Now that that's been cleared up, this has excellent proportions and shading, and I really like the metallic look of the mask. I don't think it would be that hard to include a neck, and a background would be nice too.

[{BT} Beware]

Nice!

A few trees and bushes would look nice here, because it seems kind of empty. Aside from that, the texture and shading are great.

In "Winnie the Pooh", there is a similar sign outside piglets house.

BenTibbetts responds:

Really! Cool. I didn't know that about piglet. Thanks for the helpful criticism.

[Around Past CD cover]

nice detail!

Lots of great detail in the shading and skyline, and I especially like the unique architecture(?) of the rocks.

raynoa responds:

It's kind of logo of music band in center, made from rocks.

[Ghostly Alley]

Interesting...

I have no idea where they are or whether or not they're alone, and I'm not sure whether the atmosphere is scary or sad or both...AWESOME!!!
The shading and lighting are great, and the facial expressions are fantastic. The background is pretty simple, though. The alley, which I think it is, needs a dumpster or some other alleyway "furniture", and it would be more convincing if there was more rain in the foreground for it to look like it's raining. One last thing that bothers me is how thin the female character is at the waist and legs.
Overall, the picture is amazing, and I'm just trying to point out a few things that might improve it. AWESOMELY AWESOME PICTURE!!!

[Jack Striden]

Very nice art style!

I like your art style, and the character is very unique. If you plan on making a comic with him, however, you should remove the face mask so people can understand his facial expression.

Jackstriden18 responds:

thanx for the feedback dude. but if you dont mind me correcting you a little, a character doesnt always need to show the mouth to demonstrate expressions. any good artist knows that the eyes and body language can be used to show emotion as well if not more so.

a perfect example of this is Spider man you cant see his face but the way his body is drawn when he is talking or how big the eye parts of his mask get when he's surprised show just enough emotion that the reader can relate to the character.

again im not trying to lecture you i do appreciate you pointing that out. i just wanna let you know that i know what im doing

[The Rocket and the Kid]

Great work!

I like the facial expression and highlights! Here's what I think happened:

Rocket: 'Sup
Guy: None much
Rocket: I'm gonna splode now
Guy: 'K